I decided that my angle would mostly be concerning the high rate of obesity found amongst the middle aged to older aged group. The statistics were not pretty after all.
The 2007-08 National Health Survey has for the first time since 1995 measured the exact height and weight of adults and children. Using the Body Mass Index (BMI) approach, the ABS found that 68% of adult men and 55% of adult women were overweight or obese. This is an increase over 12 years as only 64% of men and 49% of women were overweight or obese in 1995.
When looking at the age pattern of obesity in adults, the highest proportion who were overweight or obese were in the middle to older age groups (peaking at 65-74 years of age - 79% for men, and 55-64 years for women – 68%).
From here.
I found this study very interesting as the media often concentrates overwhelmingly on child obesity, where there is an actual crisis occurring in the middle aged to older aged group. I had collected a lot of quotes on this sort of thing from both interview talents. My main talents had actually commented that the reason the media hadn't focused on the over 40s age group was simply because it wasn't as 'sexy' an issue. I though this was an awesome sort of viewpoint (and also, a easy way to 'sex' up my story) and decided to take this lead as the copy and grab.
I decided to make my voicer the first story in my collection, and basically reported the findings of the survey, as well as paraphrased a quote from the nutritionist about how the environment we live in has shaped this trend. I thought this was a good way to inject a bit of explanation in a story based on boring statistics. I also wanted to make full use of my talent. I found it incredibly hard to keep to the set time limit in my voicer. I had to re-record several times in the recording booth in building 9, because I kept editing words and paragraphs out to try and make the whole thing shorter. That seemed to be the hardest bit of the assignment!
For the second story I decided to go with the copy and grab and use the great quote from my first interview, going for the angle that there really needs to be more public awareness raised about the issue of over 40s health problems. I felt this fit in perfectly with the health challenge that my interviewee was organizing and also was a very interesting critique on the media and its obsession with 'sexier' issues. I am a big believer in the power of the media to help shape perception. Although health is largely an individual responsibility, the amount of education that gets out there can also play a part of this, and the media can be a huge actor.
The third story was a kind of human interest, wrap-up of how if people over 40s start a healthier lifestyle now, the benefits on their long term health can be enormous. I used 6 second grabs of both talent to illustrate this. The voice package was probably the hardest story to condense and I am not entirely happy with the result. Keeping it so short and yet still transmitting the right information was extremely difficult. I tried to cut down the grabs to 3-5 seconds but I found it impossible. I would try editing out ums and ahs and I cut off as many unnecessary bits but I really couldn't sacrifice a lot of the quote. I think this is something I obviously have to work on, but the package did end up running to about 44.5 seconds, which I felt was perfect.
To edit the voice package together I made use of the multitrack editor function on newsboss. I first recorded my voicer in two parts, each before I introduced a talent. Then I cut the quotes and added them all together in multitrack manager. It seemed to go smoothly, although I edited the completed product in audio cut to try and make it shorter.
Another problem I realized was that during interviews, I would occasionally interject a quote with "yeah"... I had to be careful not to do this, because in one occasion it did wreck the integrity of a quote. I tried my best to edit it out, but there would be a loud ugly pop, and the audio would become inconsistent, so I ended up leaving it in. I think this is a habit radio journalists must have to abandon, I am so used to interjecting and agreeing or adding my two cents during interviews for print.
The other interesting aspect was actually recording and making sure my voice sounded good on radio. I attempted several times and tried to get my voice a little bit lower because I have a naturally high voice that sounds slightly amateur on radio. I also tried to use ranges a bit, adding emphasis and expression to words. The fact I read and re-read my stories helped me in this.
Now I am trying to burn the CD and having a bit of trouble, although I'm not sure why. Because I don't have access to Itunes at the moment I am attempting to do it in Windows Media Player... but so far no luck. Will continue trying and will update in the next hour!